Critique for Operation Auction


I’m sure many of you have heard of the massive auction taking place on eBay for romance reviewer Fatin, whose husband was recently murdered in their store. I put several things into the auction, and the critique is on the block as I type. I’ll read 3 chapters (or 50 pages, which ever is more), plus your synopsis (if you have one). I’ll offer historical advice, story advice, line editing, whatever you want, and then I’ll call you to discuss the manuscript.


So, historical authors, get your history here.

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